職高高考英語作文應(yīng)試技巧
職高高考英語作文應(yīng)試技巧房縣職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)校李軍
【摘要】以前英語作文評分依據(jù)是根據(jù)要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定,但近幾年要求“使用較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯”,因此要想得高分,除了要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度以外,還必須在較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級的詞匯上有所表現(xiàn)。句式單一,缺乏生氣的文章,哪怕無任何錯誤也不可能得高分,相反“有些錯誤,但是為了使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致”,給分檔次仍在最高檔(21~25分)。
【關(guān)鍵詞】復(fù)雜句子高級詞匯卷面
每次給學(xué)生評講作文,筆者總把學(xué)生的作文比作前去求職的“面試者”,而改卷老師就是那前去招聘的“考官”,“考官”面對成千上萬面試者,不一會就因枯燥而疲憊不堪,如何讓你這個面試者給考官留下好的印象而打高分呢?那只有你這個面試者必須要有出眾之處,讓“考官”眼前一亮,自然你的分?jǐn)?shù)就會讓你也眼前一亮。如何讓你這個面試者有出眾之處呢?
職高的學(xué)生,整體的作文都不好,如果你的作文錯誤較少,就會顯得非常好了,如果你再能用幾個復(fù)雜的句子,高級的詞匯,那你就會很出眾了。筆者把它具體歸納如下:一、一篇好作文總體要求:1、一個漂亮引人的開頭。例如:
【原文】I’magirl,I’m18yearsold,Ilikedancingandsinging,IwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer.
【修正】I,an18-year-oldgirl,whoamfondofdancingandsingwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer.2、2-3個復(fù)雜句子,3-4個高級詞匯的正文。3、一個正確無誤的結(jié)尾。4、一個整潔美觀的卷面。
二、復(fù)雜句子書寫的常見方法,也是得高分的“亮點”。1、靈活運用多種句式。
①運用主從復(fù)合句:定語從句、賓語從句、主語從句、同位語從句!苍摹矷dolikejoiningintheEnglishCorner.Itwasbuiltthreeyearsago.〔修正〕IdolikejoiningintheEnglishCornerwhichwasbuiltthreeyearsago.
②運用倒裝句。如:
〔原文〕InotonlylearnEnglishinclassbutalsolearnitinmypart-time.〔修正〕NotonlydoIlearnEnglishinclassbutalsoinmypart-time.③運用強調(diào)句
〔原文〕Wefeltveryveryhappywhenweweretogether.【修正〕Wedidfeelveryhappywhenweweretogether④運用分詞短語作狀語。如:
〔原文〕WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changeourideas,talkaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon.
〔修正〕WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changingourideas,talkingaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon⑤適當(dāng)使用被動語態(tài)
〔原文〕OurschoolheldanEnglishCornerthreeyearsago.
〔修正〕AnEnglishCornerwasbeingheldinourschoolthreeyearsago.⑥運用由with或without引導(dǎo)的短語。2.通過分句和合句,增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力.
原文〕Wecanlearnspoken-English.Andwecantalkaboutinterestingthings.WealsotalkaboutlearningEnglishexperienceandso
[修]Wecanlearnspoken-English,talkingaboutinterestingthings,English-learningexperienceandsoon.3.學(xué)會使用過渡詞。如:
①遞進:then然后,besides還有,moreover此外,furthermore而且等。②轉(zhuǎn)折:however然而,but但是,onthecountry相反,afterall畢竟等。③總結(jié):finally最后,atlast最后,inconclusion最后,inbrief總之等。④強調(diào):indeed確實,certainly一定,surely確定,aboveall尤其三、如何使用”高級詞匯”:1.使用詞組、習(xí)語代替單詞。如:[原文]IlikeEnglishCornerverymuch.
[修正]Iamkeenon/fondofEnglishCornerverymuch.2.使用一些很有“洋味”的單詞。如:
原文〕Anumberofstudentsalljoinintheactivitiesactively修正〕Manyastudenttakesanactivepartintheactivities.3.避免重復(fù)使用某一單詞或短語。如:
〔原文〕Wepracticespoken-English,talkaboutsomethinginteresting,weoftentalkaboutourexperience,too.
修正〕Wepracticespoken-English,talkingaboutsomethinginteresting,sharingourexperience,too.四、例文修改
介紹你們學(xué)校的情況:這是一所中等職業(yè)學(xué)校,有40多年的歷史,許多畢業(yè)生都已成名。全校有39個班,1600多學(xué)生,教職員工(faculty)近200人。校園很大而且美麗,四周綠樹環(huán)繞。有一座圖書大樓,兩座教學(xué)樓,一個大操場。老師對學(xué)生要求很嚴(yán)格,學(xué)生很尊敬老師。
Ourschool
(原文)Ourschoolisamediumvocationalschool.Ithasmorethanfortyyears’history.Manygraduatescomefromourschool,theyareveryfamousnow.
(修改)Ourschoolisasecondryvocationalschoolwithamorethan40-yearhistory.Manygraduateswhocomefromourschoolareveryfamousatpresent.(原文)Thereare39classesinourschool.Thenumberofthestudentsis1600.Andtherearetwohundredteachersandworkersinourschool
(修改)Thereare39classesinourschool.thenumberofthestudentsis1600,andnearly200facultiesareworkinghardinourschool.
(原文)Ourschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Therearemanytreesaroundourschool.Ourschoolhasaverybiglibrary.weoftenreadbooksinit.Twoteachingbuildingsandabigplaygroundareinourschool.
(修改)Ourcampusisfairlybigandbeautiful,aroundwhicharemanytrees,inwhicharealargeplayground,ahugelibrarywhereweoftenreadbooksandtwoteachingbuildings.
(原文)Theteachersinourschoolareverykind.Thestudentsareaskedverystrictlybytheirteachers.butthestudentsadmiretheirteachersveryvery
much.(110字)
(修改)Theteachersinourschoolareverykind,butthestudentsarerequiredverystrictlybyourteachers,andthestudentsdohonortheirteachersverymuch.(共107字)總結(jié)小語
我們不能為了長句子而刻意書寫與全文銜接不緊的長句子,而應(yīng)是在書寫完全文后,修改2-3個與全文連接順暢的長句子,替換3-4個高級詞匯。牢記基本要求。!
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一、Greatchangesinmyhometown
Morethantwentyyearsago,myhometownwasjustasmall,oldandpoortown.Mostofpeoplewerefarmers.Therewerefewfactories.Thepeopledidn’thaveenoughfoodtoeatandworeoldclothes.Theyhadahardlife.
Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthepasttwentyyears.Thepeoplehavefoundalotofwaysofmakingmoney.Nowtherearemanytallbuildings.Theyareverybeautiful.Roadsarewideandclean.Peoplecantakebusesordrivetheirowncarstogotowork.Manypeoplehavecellphonesandpersonalcomputers.People’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts.myhometownisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.
二、Savetheearth
Howtoprotecttheenvironmenthasbecomeoneofthebiggestproblemsintheworld.
It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Nomatterwherewelive,weshoulddosomethingtokeepourneighborhoodcleanandtidy.Wecancollectwastepaperorotherwastethingsforrecycling.Weshouldplantmoretreesandweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Weshouldn’tleaverubbisheverywhereandspitinpublicplaces.Wemustn’tpicktheflowersorsteponthegrassinpublic.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautifulandourlifewillbebetterandbetter.
三、Improveourenvironment
Goodenvironmentcanmakepeoplefeelhappy.Toimprovetheenvironmentmeanstoqualifyourlife.Whatshouldwedotoimproveourenvironment?
Weshouldplantmoretrees.Andweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Wheneverweseelitterontheground,weshouldpickitupandthrowitintoadustbin.Don’tspitinpublicplaces.Don’tdrawonpublicwalls.It’sourdutytokeepourearthcleanandtidy.
四、Pollutionaroundus
Inrecentyearsourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Butourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.It’sverybadforourlife.Nowmanypeoplehaveair-conditionersandcars,theyproduce(giveoff)wastegas.Moreandmoretreesare
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beingcutdown.Therearesomuchsandontheearth(leavingonlysand).Weoftenseefactoriespourwasteintoriversorlakes.Waterintheriverisquitedirty.Wehaven’tenoughcleanwatertodrinkincities.Nowweareindanger.It’sverynecessaryandimportanttoprotecttheenvironmentwell.Ithinkifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful,andourlifewillbebetterandbetter.
五、Makeourworldmorebeautiful!
Protectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttohumans.It’sourdutytotakecareofthenaturearoundus.Animalsandplantsareourbestfriends.,andweshouldsharetheworldwiththem.Weshouldn’tkillwildanimals,andwemustprotectforestsbecausetheyareanimals’home.Wemustplantmoretreesandgrass,theycanmaketheworldgreener.Themorebeautifultheworldis,thehappierliveswewillhave.Let’sdoourbesttomaketheworldbeautiful.
六、Keepourschoolclean
Wearestudyinginthisschool.Itisourdutytokeepitcleanandtidy.Itisnotgoodtospitinpublicplaces,suchasinthelibrary,intheclass.Weshouldn’tleaverubbishhereandthere.Don’tdrawpicturesonthewall,theyinfluencethelookofourschool.Weshouldkeeptheclassroomcleanandtidy.Andweshoulddosomecleaningoften.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosomethingusefulforourschool,I’msureourschoolwillbemorebeautiful.
七、Mycountrylife
Iliketoliveinthecountryside.Iliveinasmallvillage.Thereisarivernearit.Lotsoftreesarearoundmyhouse.Icanseealotoffarmsandbirds.Thereislessnoise.Theairhereiscleanerandfresher.Therearefewercars.Ireadaloudearlyinthemorning.Whenitisgettingdark,themoonisbrightinthesky.It’sveryquiet.WhataniceplaceIlivein!
八、HowtolearnEnglishwell
Asweknow,Englishhasbecomeaninternationallanguage.ItismorepopularthananyotherlanguageinChina.Englishiswidelyspokenintheworldanditisthemostusefullanguagearoundtheworld.Buthowtolearnitwell?
Thebestwayistouseitallthetime.IfwecantalkinEnglish,thinkinEnglishwecanlearnitwell.Atschool,weshouldlearntohear,speak,readandwritecarefully.WeshouldspendenoughtimeinpracticingEnglish.IfwekeeponworkinghardatEnglish,wewillbeabletobegoodatitoneday.
九、HowIlearnEnglish
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Hello,everyone.ItismyhonortotalkwithallofyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.IlikeEnglishverymuch.Ialwayspreviewandmasterthemainideaofthelessonbeforeclass.Inclass,Ilistencarefully,speakloudlyandwritecarefullyandtakenotesifnecessary.Afterclass,Idomyhomeworkcarefully.IwatchEnglishmoviesandlistentoEnglishsongs.IhavebookedanEnglishnewspaper.It’sTimesEnglishPost,Icanlearnalotfromit.IamnotafraidofrememberingthenewwordsbecauseImastermanygoodmethods.IhopeyouworkhardatEnglishandmakeprogresseveryday.That’sall.
十、HowIimprovedmyEnglish
WhenIbegantolearnEnglish,Iwaspooratit.Iwasquiteworriedatthattime.LaterI1istenedtotheteacherattentivelyinclass,andmadenotescarefully.IfIhadanyquestion,IaskedmyEnglishteacherormyclassmatesforhelp.EverymorningIreadtheEnglishtextsaloudandlistenedtotheEnglishtapes.Intheevening,afterfinishingmyhomework,IalwaysreadsomeEnglishandmagazines.
NowIamoneofthebeststudentsatEnglishinmyclass.
十一、TheimportanceofEnglish
Englishisthemostwidelyspokenintheworld.It’sspokenbymostpeopleintheUSA,GreatBritain,Canada,Australia,andNewZealand.It"salsoverywidelyusedasaforeignlanguageinmanyothercountriesoftheworld.It"swidelyusedforbusinessbetweendifferentcountries.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish,too.Itisreallyabridgetosomuchknowledge.Englishisusedbytravellersandbusinesspeoplearoundtheworld.It"soneoftheworld"smostimportantlanguagesasitissowidelyused.That"swhymoreandmorepeopleinChinaareinterestedinlearningEnglish.
Englishissousefulthatwemustlearnitwell.Nowlet’sworkhardatitandseewholearnsitfasterandbetterinourclass.
十二、Iwanttobeaninventor
TVs,telephone,fridges,cars,planes,computersandmanyotherthingsareimportantinventions.Theyhavegreatlychangedourlife.Manypeoplehavetheirideasandwishes.Theywanttoinventsomenewthingsfortheworld.Iamoneofthem.Iwanttobeaninventorinthefuture,Inventionscanbringfunandhappinesstoourlifeandmakeourdailylifemoreconvenient.Ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.NowIamahighschoolstudent.Iwilltrymybesttoworkhardatmylessonstomakemydreamcometrue.
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十三、Iwanttobeatourguide
IwanttobeatourguidebecauseBeijingwillhostthe201*OlympicGames.TherewillbemanypeopletocometoChinafromallovertheworld.Mostofthemdon’tknowChinese.TheywanttovisitmanyinterestingplacesinChina.Icanbeoneoftheguides.Icanmakemuchmoney,too.HowhappyIwillbe!Sofromnowon,Imuststudyhard.IamgoingtolearnEnglisheveryday.Iwilltrymybesttomakeitcometrue.
十四、IliketheInternet
TheInternetisplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife.It’sveryuseful.IoftensearchtheInternetforsomeinformation.Icanreadthelatestnews,dosomeshopping,andgetallkindsofinformationfromit.IcanalsodownloadtheinformationthatIneedandIcansende-mailsandmaketelephonecallstomyfriendsontheinternet.ThemostimportantthingisthatIamabletostudyallmylessonsontheInternet.
TheInternetmakesmylifemoreinterestingandcolorfulandithasawideeffectonmystudyanddailylife.Iliketheinternetverymuch.Howaboutyou/Willyouhaveatry?
十五、TheInternet
TheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttous.Withoutit,wecan’tdoworkbetter.Wecangoshoppingwithoutgoingoutofourhouses.AndwecanlistentomusicorwatchmoviesontheInternet.Itcanalsohelpalotwithourstudy.Wecanlearnmuchknowledgeondifferentsubjects,andgetinformationassoonaspossible.Butnow,someofuswork,studyorplayontheInternetforlongtime,especiallyforyoungpeopletoplaycomputergames.It’sbadforoureyesandhealth.IfwemakegooduseoftheInternet,itwillbeourbestfriendsandhelpusalot.
十六、Computer
Computerisawonderfulmachine.It"sagreatinventioninmanyyears.Itdevelopsveryquickly.Thesmallestcomputerisasbigasanote-book.Wecallitpocketcomputer.Computerbecomesmoreandmoreimportantinmanyways.Ithastouchedthelivesofeveryone,evenpeopleinfarawayvillages.Ithelpsustodowithallkindsofinformationandwegetknowledgefromit.Itcangiveusalotfun.
十七、Theimportanceofwater
Ofallthethingsweeatanddrink,wateristhemostimportant.Wecanlivewithoutfoodformanydays,buttwoorthreedayswithoutwater,usuallymakespeopledie.
However,notallofpeopleunderstandthis.Theykeepthrowingrubbishintotheriversorlakes.Somefactoriesevenpourwastewaterintotheriver.Asaresult,manyriversandlakeshavebecome
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sodirtythatthewaterisnolongersafeforpeopletodrink.
Let’sdoourbesttokeepthewatercleantosaveourselves.
十八、Water
Waterisveryimportantforourlife.Everydayweusewatertodrink,toocookandtowash.Waterisnecessaryforallplants.Theyneedwatertogrow.Peoplecan’tlivewithoutwater.Plantswilldiewithoutwater.Itisimportanttoalllivingthings.However,manypeoplepollutelakesandriverswithwastewater,sowemuststopsomepeopleorsomefactoriesfromwastingwaterorpollutingwaterandhelpkeepthewaterclean.Atthesametimeweshouldsaveasmuchwateraspossible.
十九、Ilikesports
Ifeelthattakingexerciseisgoodforourhealth.IoftenfelttiredwhenIwasstudyingbefore.FromthistermIkeeponrunningwhenIgetupinthemorning.AfterclassIoftengotoplaybasketballwithmyfriends.NowIfeelmuchbetterthanbeforeandIneverfeeltiredwhenIamstudyingAndIimprovealotinmylessons.Sopleasetakeexerciseasoftenaspossible.
二十、Introduceyourself
MynameisLiLei.IwasborninFuzhouonDecember15,201*.I’mstudyingatYucaiMiddleSchool.IlearnChinese,math,English,physics,chemistry,politics,andsoon.IlikeEnglishbest.Myfavoritesportisfootball.Myhobbiesaredrawingandcomputer.I’mveryhappytoliveinahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisadoctor.Mymotherisateacher.Weloveeachotherverymuch.
二十一、Mybestfriend
Mybestfriendis---Heis15yearsold.Wearebothinthesameclass.Heworksveryhard.Heisneverlateforschoolandhedoeswellinallhislessons.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Mymathisverypoor,soheoftenhelpsmewithmymathafterclass.Hisparentsarebothteachers.Theyareverybusy,soheoftenhelpsdothehouseworkathome.Heisalittleshorterthanmebutheisverystrong.Helikesplayingfootballverymuchatschool.Weoftenplayfootballtogetherandheplaysitprettywell.Hegetsonwellwithus.Everyoneinourclasslikeshim.
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