托福獨立作文結(jié)尾小結(jié)
一、結(jié)論性---------通過對文章前面的討論,引出或重申文章的中心思想及觀點.e.g:[1].Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat.....[2].Insummary/Inaword,itismorevaluable.......
二、后果性------揭示所討論的問題若不解決,將產(chǎn)生的嚴重后果.
e.g:[1].Wemustcallforanimmediatemethod,becausethecurrentphenomenonof...,ifallowedtoproceed,willsurelyleadtotheheavycostof.......
[2].Obviously,ifweignore/areblindtotheproblem,thereiseverychancethat..willbeputindanger.
三、號召性--------呼吁讀者行動起來,采取行動或提請注意.
e.g:[1].Itistimethatweurgedanimmediateendtotheundesirabletendcyof......[2].Itisessentialthareffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentocorrectthetendency.
四、建議性--------對所討論的問題提出建議性的意見,包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法.e.g:[1].Whileitcannotbesolvedimmediately,stillthereareways.Themostpopularis....Anothermethodis...Stillanotheroneis.....
[2].Awareness/Recognitionoftheproblemisthefirststeptowardthesituation.
五、方向性的結(jié)尾方式----其與建議性的唯一差別就是對問題解決提出總的,大體的方向或者指明前景.
e.g:[1].Manysolutionsarebeingofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnoneisadequateenough.Theproblemshouldberecognizedinawideway.
[2].Thereisnoquickmethodtotheissueof..,but..mightbehelpful/benefical.[3].Thegreatchallengetodayis......Thereismuchdifficulty,but........
六、意義性的結(jié)尾方式-------->文章結(jié)尾的時候,從更高的更新的角度指出所討論的問題的重要性以及其深遠的意義!
e.g:[1].Followingthesesuggestionsmaynotguaranteethesuccess,butthepayoffmightbeworththeeffort.Itwillnotonlybenefitbutalsobenefit.....
[2].Inanycase,whetheritisposotiveornegative,onethingiscertainthatitwillundoubtedly..
常用句型
1.therebe
(1)Therehasbeenadebateaboutwhetherprivateorpublicschoolismorebeneficialfortheall-arounddevelopmentofstudents.
(2)Therehasbeenadebateaboutwhetheroldpeopleshouldbeforcedtoretirefromworkattheageofsixty,regardlessoftheirownwishes.
(3)Therehasbeendebateaboutwhoshouldberesponsibleforthedeterioratingsituationofnaturalenvironment.
(4)Therehasbeengrowingevidence(indicating)thatyearsofcigarettesmokingisdetrimentaltopeople’shealth.
(5)Beyondnumerousobviousreasons,thereliesamorein-depthcause.
(6)With(Asaresultof)theadventofmass-productionandanimprovementinlivingstandards,therehasbeenagreaterneedforadvertisingthaneverbefore.
擴展閱讀:托福獨立作文句型總結(jié)
開頭
1.SomepeopleholdtheopinionthatAissuperiortoBinmanyways.Others,however,
contradictA.Accordingtomypersonalityandfondness,IwouldpreferAratherthanBforthefollowingreasons/therearenumerousreasonswhyIthinkA.
2.IthinkitistruethatAorB,butwhichoneismoresignificant?(Whenitcomes
to____)ObviouslyBisthecorrectanswer/moreandmorepeoplebegintoA,Ican’tagreewiththemconsideringthefollowingreasons./Both…whichismoresignificant?MyanswergoestoAforthefollowingreasons./somepeopleargue,hold,advocate,claim,prefer,….Iamoneofthem.TherearenumerousreasonswhyA./somepeoplesay,claim,arguethat,Idisagreewiththisstatement.
3.TherehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongpeopleaboutA.SomepeopleholdthatB,
however,IprefertoB.SupposingthatC.withoutB,howcan;withoutB,howcan…4.2。將原題復(fù)述___________________________________________Whenfacedwiththe
decisionofAofB,quiteafewwoulddeemthat______________________,butothers,incontrast,believeA/Basthepremierchoiceandthatisalsomypoint。Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluence-A/-B,therearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows.5.1.Theanswerofthisstatementdependsonyourownexperienceandlifestyle。Inmy
pointview,buyingcomputersisasimportantas,ifnotmoreimportantthan,buyingbooks。Soitissagaciousto____________。Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluencethechoice,thesearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows。
中間
1Themain/foremostreasonisthatAconsidering___________.Itcanbegivena1.○
concreteexample__________.
2Although_________,thereisnoevidencetosuggestthatBisalwaysbetterthanA.○
what’smore,ifyouseethat________,youcanunderstanditmoredeeply.
3Thereasonsarequiteclear.Aboveall,________.Perhapsthemostimportantexample○
ofAisthat_________
1AmoreessentialfactorwhyIadvocatetheargumentof__________isthat___/○
AnotherreasonwhyIadvocate/prefertheattitudeofA/Ineedtomentionisthat__________.Thereisgoodevidencetoshowthat____/Takethecaseofathingthat__________.Thisdemonstratemyargumentastepfurther/wecanseethat__________,furthermore________
ThisisarbitrarytojudgeBaccordingonlytotheexcuseImentionedintheaboveparagraphAnotherstrongargumentisthat_________./Thethirdandprettymuchimportantreasonisthat______Thisdemonstratetheundeniablefactthat_________Firstofall,perhapsonedisadvantagesto____________isthat______________。Forinstance,__________________。Anotherdrawbackto_____________involvesthepossibilitythat____________。Forexample,____________。
1Ofcourse,choosingBalsohasadvantagestosomeextent,for______○
2AlthoughBalsohasitsseeminglyprofoundadvantages,itcanonlybeachievedunder○
2.3.4.5.certainconditionsbecause______.
結(jié)尾
1.Butifallthesefactorsarecontemplated/takenallthesefactorsintoaccount,the
advantagesofAcarrymoreweightthanthoseofB.fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthat____________.Andsuchexperiencewilldefinitelybehelpfulinone’slaterlife.
2.Afterunderstandingthereasoningabove,it’squitesafenowtosay:tochooseAisa
wiseaction.3.Inaword,tochooseAorBissomethingofadilemmatothepublicbecausethey
sometimesareconfusedbytheseeminglygoodqualitiesofB,andneglectthegenuinelygoodaspectsofA。Forthereasonspresentedabove,IstronglycommittothenotionthatA,butnotB。
開頭段
開頭1:
Oneday,mysister,whohasbeenpregnantforsixmonths,caughtabadcold.Shewantedtotakemedicineforhercoldbutshewonderedwhetherthemedicinewilldoharmtothebaby.Sheturnedonthecomputer,wentonlineandorsearchedforinformationonthesafetyofthecoldmedicine.Afterthat,shemadearightdecision.Theimpactthatcomputerhasonourdailylifeisundeniable.Thereisagrowingawarenessofboththepositiveandnegativeinfluencesthatcomputershavebroughttous.Somepeoplemightberighttothinkthatcomputershavemadelifecomplexandstressful.Frommypointofview,thoseshortcomingscanbeneglectedwhentheadvantagesofcomputersarementioned.
開頭2:
Accordingtoarecentstatisticontheinternet,thenumberofsingle-childfamilyoccupies75percentofChinesefamilies,andundoubtedlyhasthetendencyofincreasing.Itfollowsthatparentsorotheradultrelativesmaylikelypaymoreattentiontotheirchildren,forthereasonthattheenergyofparentshasbeensavedalotcomparedtothosewhoownseveralchildren.Somepeopleinsistonmakingdecisionsfortheirchildren,consideringthattheyaretooyoungtojudge.However,othersbelievethatthereishardlyanynecessitytohelpsothatchildrenwillcultivatethecapabilityofanalyzingimportantproblems.Frommyperspective,Icompletelyagreewiththelatteridea.開頭3:
Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorecompanies(includinginternationalcompaniesandsmallcompanies)arefounded,buttherearenotenoughpeopletotakethesepositions.Soalargenumberofworkingopportunitiesareprovidedtopeoplewhoarestillteenagerstudents.Insomecountries,somepeoplethinkifteenagersdoajobwhiletheyarestillstudyinginschool,itmayhaveabadimpactontheirgrade.Othersconsiderthatteenagersshouldhavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatter.Becauseteenagerscanlearnamountofusefulexperiencethroughworkingandtheythinkthroughthejobtheywillacquiresomeknowledgeofhowtogetagoodrelationshipwithothers.
開頭4:
Itisnotraretoseemanystudentsdozingoffordoingotherthingswhiletheprofessoristryinghisbestexplainingatheory.Mostpeopleclaimthatthisphenomenonresultsfromthesevereschoolattendanceruleandsuggestthatstudentsshouldbegivenmorerighttodecidewhichclasstoattendaccordingtotheirowninterestandtheirjudgmentofthevalueoftheclass.Thisideaisstronglyopposedbynumerouspeoplewhoholdtheopinionthatitisthefaultofthestudentsthatleadstothecurrentproblem.Theystandonthegroundthatstudentsdonotreallyknowwhattheyareparticularlysuitabletomakeresearchonandwhatkindofclassisremarkablyvaluable.Consequentlytheythinkhighlyoftherulethatstudentsshouldattendalltheclasses.AsfarasIamconcerned,strictschoolattendancereallybenefitsthestudentsinnotonlyacquiringknowledgebutalsotheirsocialskills.
開頭5:
Technologyreferstoskills,knowledge,andtechniquesthathumanbeingsuseintheirdailylifeandwork.Aseverybodymayfind,technologydevelopsdaybyday.Howdoesthedevelopmentoftechnologyaffectourlife?Manypeopleholdtheopinionthatitisduetothedevelopmentoftechnologythathumanbeingshaveaccesstothecomfortablemodernlife.Ontheotherhand,anumberofpeoplearealwaysawareofallkindsofdestructiveinfluenceofthetechnologicaldevelopmentonus.AsfarasIamconcerned,thedevelopmentoftechnologydoesfarmoregoodthanharmtopeople’shappiness.開頭6:
I’magreatbelieverinluck,andIfindtheharderIwork,themoreIhaveofit.ThomasJefferson
Thereislittledoubtthatifpeoplewanttobesuccessful,hardworkingisanessentialelement.Whileitisalsoclearthatluckplaysanundeniableroleinone’srealizingdreams.IcompletelyagreewithThomasJeffersonandbelievethathardwork,inmostcases,helpspeoplefindandcatchtheirluckandfinallyreachtheirlifegoals.開頭7:
Justimagineifastudentcannotfindateachertohelphim,whatwillhappen?Somepeoplebelievethathecanlearnbetterbyhimself;however,eachcoinhastwosides,othersthinkthatitisalwaysbettertohaveateacher.Iagreewiththelatterone.Teacherscanhelpustoacquireamountsofknowledgeeasierthanotherswhostudyalone,leadustochoosetherightwayofourlife,andletusknowhowtobeagoodperson.開頭8:Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorecompanies(includinginternationalcompaniesandsmallcompanies)arefounded,buttherearenotenoughpeopletotakethesepositions.Soalargenumberofworkingopportunitiesareprovidedtopeoplewhoarestillteenagerstudents.Insomecountries,somepeoplethinkifteenagersdoajobwhiletheyarestillstudyinginschool,itmayhaveabadimpactontheirgrade.Othersconsiderthatteenagersshouldhavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatter.Becauseteenagerscanlearnamountofusefulexperiencethroughworkingandtheythinkthroughthejobtheywillacquiresomeknowledgeofhowtogetagoodrelationshipwithothers.
中間段
中間段1:
Therearemanyqualitiesthatmakeupagoodneighbor,butthemostessentialofthesearefriendliness,helpfulness,andbeingconsiderate.Agoodneighbormustbefriendlysothatyoucanestablishgoodrelationswithhimorher,whilebeinghelpfulmakestheneighbormuchmoreofanaidineverydaylife.Finally,beingconsideratemakesaneighbormuchmorepleasanttolivenextto,asanover-friendlyandover-helpfulneighborwhodoesn"tconsideryourcircumstancesisratherunhelpful.中間段2:
Afriendlyneighborwhoishorriblyineptisstillnotverymuchhelp.Whilefriendlinessisessential,simplegood-willisnotenoughtomakeagoodneighbor.Ifyousufferedfromsomenaturaldisaster,orsomeaccident,ahelpfulneighborwouldbeabletodomorethingsthananeighborwhowasconcerned,butunabletohelp.Forexample,ifyourcarwouldn"tstart,imagineyourneighbordidn"tknowhowtousethejumpercables.Despitegoodintentions,yourneighbormightendupharmingyouoryourvehicle.Acapableandfriendlyneighborwhocouldhelpyouwithmanythingsthatyoumighthavetroubledoingalonewouldbeoffargreaterhelp.中間段3:
Ofcourse,whilefriendlinessandcapabilitiesareimportant,withoutamutualunderstandingandconsideration,anyneighborcanbehorriblyfrustrating.Inthemodernworld,whereyourneighborcouldbeofacompletelydifferentculture,understandingandconsiderationareveryimportant.Imagineaneighborwhohappenstobeafivestarchefinvitesyouoverfordinner.Thoughhecertainlyhastheappropriatetalentsforcooking,andthegoodwilltoinviteyouover,ifhefailedtoconsideryourcultureorpersonalpreferences,youmightnotexamplethemealatall.Forexample,ifyouwereJewishandfollowedyourreligiouslimitationsonfoods,youwouldn"tbeabletoeatmanydifferentkindsoffoods.Thus,withoutconsiderationforyourcultureandsituation,allofthegood-willyourneighbormightbringwouldbeuseless.中間段4:
Anygoodneighborwillbeagoodfriend,someoneyoufeelcomfortableinvitingtoyourhouse,eatingdinnerwith,andtakingcareofyourhouseifyouaregone.Noneofthesethingswouldbepossibleifyourneighboronlymindedhisorherownbusinessanddidn"tbothertogotoneighborhoodactivities.Thoughthisneighbormightnotbetrouble,heorshecertainlywouldn"tbeverymuchfuntolivenextto,asyoumightaswellnothaveaneighboratall.Afriendlyneighborcanmaketheneighborhoodfarmoreinvitingandfun;imagineaneighborhoodwherenoneofyourneighborsinvitedyoutoneighborhoodactivitiesandleftyoucompletelyalone.Thisneighborhoodwouldcertainlyseemlessinterestingcomparedwithaneighborhoodwhereyourneighborgreetedyouwhenyouarrivedandinvitedyoutosomeneighborhoodactivities.中間段5:
Istronglysupporttheideaofouterspaceexplorationforitmaybenefithumansnotonlyinthepresentbutalsointhefuture.Byexploringtheouterspace,governmentsshouldjointheirhandstotakeadvantageofthelatesttechnologyandskillsinvariousfieldstoguaranteethesuccessoftheprogram,ensuringthereturningofthepricelessequipmentandespeciallypreciouslivesoftheastronauts,thusintensifyingthecooperationofdifferentcountriesintheworld.因果論證
Andatthesametime,theachievementoftheouterspaceexplorationprogrammaysurelycontributetothewellbeingofouroffspringinmanyways.Ourchildrenandgrandchildrenmayhavemorelivingspaceandwillnolongersuffertheamazingpopulationdensityoftheearthandtheymayliveinanothersatelliteoneday.Inaddition,theadvancedtechnologyincommunicationsandremotecontroldevelopedintheouterspaceexplorationprogramaresuretobecomepopularlyusedinthefuturelife.舉例論證
Ascanbeseenfromtheaboveanalysis,theadvantagesofcarryingouttheouterspaceexplorationareobviousandallowusnoexcusetovoteagainstit.
中間段6:
Peoplewholiveinasmalltownoftenhaveamuchcomfortablelifestyle.Mostofthemdonothavetosufferhighworkingstress.Althoughtheaveragepayismuchlessthanthatofbigcities,thepriceofdailynecessities,suchasvegetablesormeat,isusuallylessexpensive.Insteadofsufferinglonelinesswhichisprevalentinbigcities,childrenmightgrowupmorehealthilybecauseofharmoniousrelationshipamongresidentsinasmalltown.Peopleinasmalltowndon’thavetogetupsoearlyinthemorningbecausetherehasbeennotrafficjam,andnobodydrivessofastinasmalltownastocausecaraccidentswhicharecommonlyseeninalmosteverystreetinbigcities.Theymighthavefewerchannelsintelevision,buttheyhavemorefriendsreadilyavailabletochatorentertainwith.
結(jié)尾段
結(jié)尾1:
Studentsarethefuturemastersoftheworld.Onlywhentheyhaveaccumulatedabundantknowledgeandtactfulsocialskillscantheybeconfidenttosaytheyarefullypreparedtomanagetheworld.Strictlyrequiredschoolattendanceisoneofthebestapproachestohelpingstudentsaccomplishthetwo.Whileatthesametimeschoolsshouldalsotakemeasurestodrawtheattentionfromallstudentsandimprovethequalityofteaches""lecturestobeappealingtoallstudents.結(jié)尾2:Inconclusion,peoplearelivinglongernowowingtothedevelopmentofmedical,cookingandmatchingfoodinrightwaysandsoon.Ifeelthatifpeoplewishtolivelonger,perhapstheyshouldtakemoreexercisesandaskfortheexpertsofnutritionhowtocookmealsandmatchfoodinrightways.
結(jié)尾3:
Inconclusion,Ithinkalthoughadvancesintechnologymaydosomeharmtopeople"slifetosomedegree,mostimpactsexertedbytheforwardpaceoftechnologyaredesirableandbeneficial.Weshouldtakemeasurestoguidethedirectionofthedevelopmentoftechnologyandpreventallkindsofimproperuseoftechnologysothatwecanenjoymoreconveniencesinbothworkandindailylifebroughtbytheeverimprovingtechnology.結(jié)尾4:
Inaword,Ibelievethatuniversitiesshouldrequirestudentstotakeclassesinmanysubjects,ratherthanrequirestudentstospecializeinonesubject.Onlybydevelopingthecomprehensiveknowledgeandskillsofeachstudent,canastudentusewhathe/shehaslearnedinamoreeffectivewayandreallyenjoythefruitsoftheirhardwork.Andwhatismore,thegreatercomprehensiveexpertisethestudentshave,thestrongeranationwillbe
好句
1.Itisjustlikeeveryembryohastogothroughdifferentstagesduringhisdevelopment.Andthese
stagesareoftensimilartothestagesduringtheevolutionofhumanbeing.
2.ithinkitistruethatbothfriendsandfamilycaninfluenceayoungadult"sbehavior.However
whenitcomestowhichoneismoreimportant,ithinktheanswerobviouslygoestothelatter.Thereasonsareasfollows
大牛的三篇例文
于是我的所得:思想有多遠,你就寫多遠,跟著自己的思想走!(當(dāng)然要于自己的TS有關(guān))請大家花個幾分鐘好好體會一下這句話,這并不是我所能傳授的一種很CONCRETE的東西,這句話太ABSTRACT了,我并不奢望大家都能一下子有所感覺,但是希望大家在練習(xí)的時候會對這句話有更多的體會。我也是在不斷的練習(xí)中慢慢深化這個理念的。
用這個思想我來給大家一個EXAMPLE吧:TOPIC:Petsshouldbetreatedasfamilymembers
首先確定自己的立場,大概估計一下自己在那一方面的話比較多,正、反、還是中立。選好后刻在你腦子里,免得偏題。
我的立場:Yes,theyshouldbetreatedasfamilymemebers.
很明顯選擇這個立場就是要選擇PETS對我們有利的地方,不然的話誰要它!于是不停的問自己,PETS對我們有什么好處呢?首先PETS都有什么樣的呢?第一個出現(xiàn)在我腦子里的是狗。那么狗對我們有什么好處呢?人類最忠實的朋友。但是怎么繼續(xù)呢?養(yǎng)過狗的人體會深刻,可以把自己和狗的相處講出來,沒養(yǎng)過的難道就不能編一段自己與狗相處的日子嗎?于是我編了一段:小的時候家里養(yǎng)的狗是我的唯一玩伴,給我?guī)砹丝鞓贰9愤有什么好處呢?大家還在什么情況下聽過狗呢?導(dǎo)盲犬聽過吧,它們具體工作是什么呢?這下你有得寫了吧,這個可以寫上幾大段都不重復(fù),導(dǎo)盲犬幫助盲人領(lǐng)路,于是盲人可以自己出巡不用請個小保姆照顧,它們知道車來了要停,走盲道,甚至有的狗可以幫人開門!不管它們能否做這些事,寫上去再說(當(dāng)然不要太離譜,它們可不會飛)。再想想平時什么地方狗多呢?公園里!老年人大清早出來散狗,晚上吃完飯還要散,說明什么呢?說明他們在精神上對狗有依賴性啊,兒女外出打工,工作,一年難得回來幾回,狗自然而然可以擔(dān)當(dāng)這個DUTY了,甚至還有些老人沒有兒女,于是它們把自己的PETS當(dāng)成自己的兒女了。有些地方還有什么狗的各種各樣的比賽,這些比賽得獎了是對家庭的一種榮譽,沒得獎大家也在一起HAPPY了一下啊......等等等等。大家要不停的問自己,出現(xiàn)了思想,不要覺得太膚淺而PASS掉,多聯(lián)想一下,思路不是你一開始分析TOPIC的時候就完成的,有的時候你在寫的時候,思路會源源不斷的涌出,這個時候說明你初得要領(lǐng)了。
現(xiàn)在奉上我寫的一篇關(guān)于這個TOPIC的文章:
……Petsareuniversalallovertheworld.Peopleindifferentcountrieshavepets.Ihavebeenwonderingwhyitissocommonforustohavepets?Well,theyareapparentlyourfriends.Sometimestheyaregreathelpers.Andtosomepeople,theyareimportantfamilymembers.
Petscanbefriendswithwhichwecanliveandspendtime.IusedtohaveapetdogwhenIwasveryyoung.It"stheonly
friendIhavebecauseMomandDadusedtobetoobusywiththeirworktospendtimewithme.TheonlywaythatIcould
havefunwastoplaywithmypet.Weusedtorace,swim,andevensleeptogether.Ithasauniquepositioninmychildhood
memory,becauseitmademyearlieryearssomuchfuninsteadofbeinglonelyandmiserable.
Petsarenotmerelyanimalsthatservethepurposeof**funforusassomeonewouldthink.Insteadtheyhavetheir
positioninthissocietythatisirreplaceable.Theyareimportanthelperstothedisabled.Forexample,somedogscanleadthe
wayfortheblind.Theyknowwhichwouldbethesafepathtogo,andtheyknowwhentostopifacarpassesby.Theyhave
madethelivesoftheblindmucheasierbecausethesepeoplecangooutsidethemselves.Besidesleadingtheway,somepetscanevenopenthedoorforpeoplewhocouldnotstanduprighttodoit.Ican"timaginewhattheirlifewouldbewithouttheseaidpets.
Petscanalsoserveasapsychologicalcomfortfortheold.It"squitecommontoseetheoldwalktheirdogsinnearbyparksearlyinthemorningandevening.Thesepeopleneedsomeonetobewithallthetime.Buttheirchildrenhavetheir
ownlivesandit"snotpossibleforthemtobewiththeirparentsallthetime.Thereforethisdutyistakenbythesepets.Some
oldpeoplewhodon"thaveanychildreneventreatthesepetsastheirchildren.
Petsaredifferentthanotherwildanimals,.Theyplayamoreimportantroleinourlivesinsomeway.Theymakeushappy
andhelpus.Soifwedecidetohaveapetinourfamily,weshouldalsobepreparedtotreatitasafamilymemberinreturnforthebenefitsitbringsus.
讀過這篇文章會發(fā)現(xiàn),并沒有什么閃光句型或者詞語,文采一般,但是我考試時的作文也不會比這個高到那里去。這個是我剛有體會時早期的寫作,大家初步分析,并試著自己就一個TOPIC分析分析看。呆會我會再來再給大家分析幾個TOPIC,并附上我的寫作。大家千萬不要試著模仿我的用詞用句,就像我說的,都很簡單,每個人都會,關(guān)鍵看看文章的思路和思想。如文章有不妥之處,大家敬請指出,我們共同進步。
TOPIC:itismoreimportanttoworkatajobthatyouenjoythanitistoearnalotofmoney
Idisagreewiththestatementthatitismoreimportanttoworkatajobthatyouenjoythanitistoearnalotofmoney.**alotofmoneymeanshavingmoreopportunities.ThereforeitismorebeneficialtomethansimplytakingajobthatIenjoy.
Atthiscurrentsituationwherewearesufferingfromthisglobaleconomicdownturn,whatconcernsmethemostiswhetherornotIcanlivethroughthishardtime,whetherornotIwillbeabletosupportmyfamily.ThereforeIdefinitelywantajobthatIcanmakemoremoneybecauseitmeetsmymosturgentrequirement.Enjoymentwouldbenegligiblewhencomparedwithlivelihood.
**alotofmoneywillalsoleadtomorehappinessthanthejoyyougetfromtakingajobyoulike.Forexample,ifIamamillionaire,notonlycanIprovidemyfamiliesadecentliving,butalsoIcanhaveexcessmoneysothatIcandonatetothepoorerpeople.IthinktheoverallhappinessofthepoorgettingaidwouldovermountthehappyfeelingImyselfget.Inthissense,takingajobthatIenjoyratherthanajobwithadecentpaywouldbealittlemoreselfish.
Finally,havinghighpaymentjobdoesn"tnecessarilymeanthatIwilllosethechancetodothejobthatIenjoy.IcancertainlyconsiderdoingthejobthatIenjoyafterIsaveacertainamountofmoney.Thisstrongeconomicfoundationwillreducealotofmyconcerns,thereforeIcandothejobthatIlikemorefreelyandIwillendupenjoyingthejobmore.Besidesthisbenefit,astrongeconomicabilityalsomakesitpossibleformetoenjoyalotmorethings.Then,maybethejobthatIonceconsideredinterestingwillnotbethatfunanymore.
Whilesomepeoplemayarguethatthisstanceistoorealisticormaterialistic,Iwanttoremindeveryonethatwe,ashumanbeings,havemoreobligationsthatweneedtofulfill.Ahighpaymentjobwillmakethesealoteasiertomeet.What"smore,italsowillofferusopportunities.Sopaymentwillbemynumberoneconcernwhenichooseajob.
TOPIC:Advancesintransportationandcommunicationliketheairplaneandthetelephonehavechangedthewaythatnationsinteractwitheachotherinaglobalsociety.Chooseanothertechnologicalinnovationthatyouthinkisimportant.
Althoughinternetcameintobeingabout2decadesago,ithaschangedthewaywelivemuchmorethanthelast200years.Itsinfluenceonbusiness,communicationandinformationissoprofoundthatpeoplenowsimplycan"tlivewithoutit.
Basedonthedevelopmentofinternet,alotofnewtypesofbusinessrangingfrominternationalconglomeratetoregionalsmallonlineshopsarealsoestablished.ThemostfamousinternetbasedinternationalconglomeratewouldbeGoogle.Companieslikethisbasicallydonotsellproductsbuttheirservice.Thischangedthetraditionalwayofdoingbusinesswhichalwaysinvolvedsomeconcreteproductsselltopeople.Internetopensacyberworldinwhichahugemarketisuntapped.Besideslargecompanies,internetalsoprosperssmallbusinesses.Forexample,localstorescandotheirbusinessonline.Alltheyhavetodoistocreateawebsiteoftheirownandallcustomersneedtodoistogototheirwebsitesandorderwhattheywant.Thentheyjustneedwaitathomefortheproductstheyjustpurchasedtobedelivered.Thisway,weneverneedtoworryaboutthetraditionalexhaustingshopping.
Internetalsofundamentallychangedthewaypeoplecommunicate.Therearealotofchattingprograms,suchasMSN,YAHOOMESSENGER,SKYPE,thatmakeitpossibleforpeoplefromdifferentpartsoftheworldtohaveaconversationwitheachotheraslongaseveryonehasaccesstointernet.Theyevenprovideaudioandvideoservicesmeaningnotonlypeoplecanchat,butalsotheycanhearandseeeachother.Besidesthat,whatreallymakesthemappealingisthattheydon"tchargeusfordoingthesethings.Theseadvantagesdefinitelysurpasstheservicethatmobilephoneprovidesus.
Internetisalsolikeahugetankthatcancontainalmostinfiniteinformation.Asearchhasshownthatrightnowtheinformationthatinternetcanprovideusexceedsanylibraryintheworldandsomeevenarguethatithasmoreinformationthanallthelibrariesintotal.Icertainlywouldn"tdoubtthat.Iuseinternettosearchforalotofinformation.WheneverIhaveanprojecttofinish,thefirstthingIdoistogototheinternettofindrelevantmaterials.
Thereisnodoubtthatinternethashadafundamentalchangeonoureverydaylife.Thoughtherearemanyproblemsthataccompanywithit,wecan"tdenythatinternetisoneofthemostinnovationsinhumanhistory.
TOPIC:Youareplanningtostudyabroad.Whatdoyouthinkyouwilllikeanddislikeaboutthisexperience?Why?
Studyingabroadisbecomingmoreandmorepopularamongcollegestudents.Itnotonlyprovidesusopportunitytolearnsophisticatedtechnologyandknowledgebutalsogivesuschancestoexperiencedifferentculturesandlife.Howeverthefactthatitwillgetmeawayfrommyfamilyandfriendsforalongtimeisabothertome.
OneofthemajorreasonsthatIwanttostudyabroadistoacquirestateofthearttechnologyinaparticularfield.NowIammajoringelectricalengineering,andIwanttogetfurthereducationinthisfieldasapostgraduate.HoweverelectricalengineeringisnotaswelldevelopedinmyownnationasitisintheUS.Soinordertobeanexpertinthisfieldandtofollowmypersonalinterest,studyingabroadisaverygoodoption.ThiswayIcanalwayshaveaccesstovaluableknowledgeaswellaskeepmyselfinthefrontierinelectricalengineering.
Besidesgettingtechnicalknowledge,studyingabroadisalsoachanceformetolearnaboutdifferentculture.It"squiteobviousthatlifeinanothercountrywouldbetotallydifferentfromthatofmyown.Firstofall,IhavetospeaktheirlanguagesothatIcaninteractwithotherpeople.Secondly,Ihavetoadjustmyselftotheirwayofthinking,andwayofdealingwithpeople,inotherwords,socialskills.FinallyIwouldalsoacquaintmyselfwithavarietyofnewthingsthatsimplydon"texistinmyhomecountry.Forexample,AmericanfootballisnotthatpopularinChina,butifIstudyinAmericaandIwanttohavetopicwithotherstudents,IthinkwhatIwillhavetodoistoforcemyselftowatchit,leastofall,gettoknowitalittlebit.Theseexperienceswouldbeveryvaluablesinceyoucannotgetthemanywhereelsebutthisparticularcountry.
WhileIexperiencenewcultureIwouldcertainlymissthingsandpeopletraditionalinmyowncountry.Studyingabroadisalong-terminvestment.Imightbeawayfromhomeforayearormaybeeventwoyears,whichmeansthatIwillnotbeabletoseemyfamiliesandfriendsforthatlongtime.Withoutdoubt,Iwillmissthemalot,andsometimesthismissmightbesointensethatIsimplycan"tdealwithit.What"smoreIwillmissthetraditionalfoodssomuchaswell.IneverexpectthatIcanfindthesimilarflavorofthosefoodsinanothercountry.Sothatposesmeanotherproblemofstudyingabroad.
Despiteallthesedisadvantages,Istillprefertostudyabroad.Becauseafterall,myultimategoalistolearnsophisticatedknowledgeandtechnology,whichcouldbetterpreparesmeformyfuturechallenges.
三篇應(yīng)該差不多了吧,大家好好看看吧。
最后我來說說綜合寫作:
這個其實面很廣,不好說。比如說有的是READING中三個論點非常明顯,然后LECTURE中再來三個論點,要么SUPPORT要么OPPOSE。這類的綜合寫作相對來說是比較好寫的,比BARRON,DELTA上的綜合寫作都要好寫。大家可以用高分120寫作,上面基本上是這一類的。我只有一次IBT考試經(jīng)驗,我考的時候就是這一類的,但是至于是不是所有的考試都是這一類的,我就不好說了。所以大家還是最好把每一類的都寫寫,重點可以放在我剛才講的那一類上。
下面附上一篇我考試前一天晚上寫的這一類的文章(高分120上的關(guān)于馬可波羅的)
Inthissetofmaterials,thereadingpassagediscussesreasonsthatseemtoshowthatMarcoPolonevermadeittoChina,whileinthelecture,theprofessorarguesthatshethinksMarcoPolodidgotoChinaandgivesherreasons.
ThefirstpointmadeinthereadingpassageisthatthefactthatMarcoPoloneverpickedupanyChineseandhisreferencetoChineselocationsareborrowedfromPersianlanguagedemonstratesthathedidnotarriveatChina.Howeverinthelisteningpassage,whiletheprofessorconfirmsthefact,shearguesthattheborrowingofnamesfromPersianisreasonablebecausethePersianregioniswhatconnectsAsiaandEuropeinthepast.ThesecondpointmadeinthereadingpassageisthatMarcoPolonevermentionedteaandteahouseinChinainhisbooks.Thereforeit"sno
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